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RFTA: chapter 1 page 5 by KisshuChan RFTA: chapter 1 page 5 by KisshuChan
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Chapter 1

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Bleh.. took me forever and a day. Page six will be up next week! :D

Remember to drop by the original fanfiction this is based on and tell the real author about what you think! I'll know she'll appreciate every bit of it :heart:


Summary
Pein's final jutsu gave life back to those he slayed in Konoha. However, it also brought back someone who never expected to live again. Rising from the ashes, how will Minato Namikaze readapt to life and the war he is flung into?

Fanfiction can be found here

Story: :iconkaricat:
Illustrations: :iconkisshuthekiller:

Naruto characters are copyright Masashi Kishimoto
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Howling-Wolf Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very well done, and I like how you're showing the fear and claustrophia Minato experienced when he woke up. Very ambitious of you to turn RftA into a comic (totally deserves one). It's always different and interesting to see something that you've read, so I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with the rest. Keep up the good work. :)
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KisshuChan Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! :D I'm glad it's noticed because it's really hard to make his fear "shine". Fun! But hard.. xD

Mhmm! Ambitious indeed! xD (Maybe a tiny bit too ambitious now that I know that RFtA isn't going to end any time soon.. xD) But I really want to follow it all the way to the door(if you can say that) And finish it. It's great fun and practice too ^^

Thanks for the loving comment and sorry about the late reply :heart:
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I have to say, this might yet be my favorite page so far. Especially the last panel. It's very, very well done! I especially like the way you've done his expression in it. Really shows some strain.

His eyes in panel 4 are a bit strange. generally, there's something weird about your wide-eyes, but I can't put my finger on it. I think the iris and pupils grow smaller in manga. That might be it.

Really well done panel. The arm movements are really nicely done and you stick to body proportions really well. ^_^ Can't wait for more. ^_^"

In honor of page 5, I'll go to bed and think of how to resolve chapter 27 tonight.
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KisshuChan Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe thanks ^w^ Something I really want to make work is the expressions, especially in this kind of limited environment Minato is currently residing.. =P I'm glad it has worked so far.. XD

Hmm I have noticed it too. bit I haven't been able to figure out what's wrong yet :x I will try what you suggested ^^ Hopefully it'll get better when we (at long last) gets out of that box and get some lighting to play with ;D It -may- have some influence on the eyes I guess :3

Hahaha! xD I swear! That anatomy is what makes the pages take so long to come out xD I have stopped counting the amount of different sketches I have to make to even get something decent :P The load of photo references is pretty heavy too xD

Kekeke, prepare to do that again, because page 6 will be up tomorrow! >D

Sorry about the late reply and thanks a lot for the always loving comments :heart:
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